Become a better business writer
Writing a business memo, email, or short analysis is not like other writing. If you are writing to someone important, they probably have little time and a short attention span. Use the little attention you get wisely;
Have a firm recommendation and analysis of an issue your reader needs to act on.
You do not need to entertain; a clearly and concisely stated opinion with analysis to back it up is already interesting.
Put your bottom-line up front. Share your conclusion or recommendation immediately, while you (still) have your reader’s attention. Then back it up with analysis and facts.
Keep sentences short (~20 word max) and easy to read by avoiding ‘long’ words.
Share data in an easy to understand table structure.
I used to have a leader who mostly read emails on the phone. In these cases I was even more concise and made sure my recommendation was clear ‘before the fold’.
Structure your content:
Summarise why you are writing
- 2 or 3 sentences
- intro, problem descriptionYour recommendation. Be blunt
- 2 or 3 sentences
- call to actionArguments supporting your recommendation
- 2 or 3 sentences per argument
- your expansionSupporting data and analyses
- table or visual
- your data
This structure can also be applied to business slides.
When managing my team this 2-page doc by Jerry Neumann was mandatory material for all, as it perfectly summarises ‘writing for business’. I still read through the doc every 2 months or so, as a reminder to keep my comms concise.
Use it to your advantage:
the Gdoc and more from Jerry Neumann on his Twitter account: https://twitter.com/ganeumann/status/1227044247964176384